Saturday, February 28, 2015

Poetry by Joan McNerney and Flash Fiction by Will Mayo

 



Since I'm behind schedule, tonight I thought that I'd combine two of the upcoming entries.  The first is Joan McNerney's "Dream House."   Also, for those of us in the cold and snow, Monet's Water Lilies bring a welcome warmth.  Looking at his paintings, I don't even mind the bugs of summer!


Dream House

Once I passed lovely gardens
gliding over a small bridge.  Dancing
upon moving stones.  Large perfect
pebbles in cool water.

Feet floating with no effort. 
How wondrous to slip...slide...glide.
Coming to towers glowing
bright orange sand...sandstone castles

O how I miss the ocean!  So
exciting watching from far above
as ships enter port.  Am I flying
now to a destiny unknown?

Most times simply sleepwalking along
amazing hometown avenues, suddenly
full of exotic trees, sculptured stairways,
bridges, sparkling fountains.  Twice my
superb high-rise grew in dangerous areas.

There were lines of people waiting.
All standing in menacing rows before
limestone, brownstone, red brick buildings.
Suddenly scattering like angry pigeons.

A dazed ride took me on a long trip,
everything twisting and turning around
so many tunnels, highways, bridges.
Finally arriving at a condominium
full of brilliant flowers.

Yet always wanting to return to my
dream house, my sandstone castle.
Where has it gone? 

And now for Will Mayo's flash fiction....

ALONE

By

Will Mayo


The room is built of concrete blocks, laid over with the gaudiest of tile.  Men and women dressed all in white, parade the corners, some with hypodermic needles and stethoscopes, others with strange-speaking tongues.

The bed itself is in the center of the room.  Laid over with white sheets stained with yellow and brown, the best that can be said of the man who lies there is that he stays still; he does not move in habitual dance like the others.

You would think it would take an effort to remain this still; so still that not even all the devils raising muster could bring him from his sleep.  But, rather, he lies there in seemingly the most tranquil of sleeps; his eyelids not even twitching as he lies there.  Yet only a fool would call this paradise.

Now and then, a nurse will come by, past the writhing dancers, and check all the tubes running throughout his body for minimal sustenance.  Either that or inject a needle into one of the bulging veins off his thin, frail arms, bolted down to the bed so that they don’t turn inwards.  She assumes nothing.

The doctors themselves no longer come by, having long since given up all semblance of hope.  “No counseling fit for the dead,” they say whenever the nurse asks them.  If only they knew.

He listens to their every speech, wishes to smile if the muscles will allow it.  Much in the manner of an old dog that has at last learned a new trick, he has fooled them all.  Or so he thinks.

Behind the thin veil of muscles that have gone to atrophy and breathing that has long since ceased to be noticeable, he dreams.  He is on a high plain, all green with wild grass and an occasional bush or tree, as the wind blows its fierce racket through the cloudy air.  There is a feeling of desolation here, one which only he could take pleasure in.

And he is alone, away from all the wild dancers and scowling doctors of the place he has grown to love and hate at much the same time.  It gives him a feeling of exhilaration to be so alone, and for him not to have to move to get to where he is.  “Like magic,” he says to himself, “this stuff of dreams.”

But just as he has muttered these words to himself, a figure appears out of the mists of the high plain.  Skeptical and bemused at having his aloneness invaded, he is still somewhat interested as he watches her appear.  A familiar sight, she is in a red cardigan sweater, old-style khaki pants, and an Eton jacket that does not hide her beauty.  Her hair is long and flows about her face to her shoulders in a Valentine shape.  As she speaks, he can still hear the feel of Old Boston come down to countenance itself in the South.

“I’m sorry, James,” she says, with a slight hurt look in both her face and voice.  “I never should have made fun of you.  It was the worse of times--for both of us.”  He listens to her carefully, can almost feel the old stones of Johns Hopkins beneath his feet, but, no, he must stay in this dream, no other.  A tear runs down his ragged cheek, if only in the winds of the plain, not the white-draped hospital room.

Her words -- Catherine’s words -- bring back memories of an intimate moment, best left to silence and reflection of the flesh; not laughter down the halls of the fraternity.

Finally, as if in some obscure rhythm, his arms herein cloaked in the old-school tweed as well as the mist, come up just as hers do.  He walks towards her just as she walks towards him.  There is a frantic tumbling in the wind, just to reach one another’s arms; the ultimate challenge to his aloneness, the dependence of self.

But it is, he realizes once more, just a dream.  The wind howls one last time, and he tries to ease out a scream, as he hears again, behind blinded eyes, the wild dancers of the room.  It comes out as breath just a bit more raspy, a breath that only the nurse can hear.  His skin, his bones, they do not move.

“I think he needs to be alone a while,” the nurse says, as she ushers the long bed away.  “This is getting to be too much attention for him.”  The doctor orders one more shot.



What Lurks In These Woods

By

Will Mayo


It happened one night in the summer of my seventh year that my father and I were headed home from the family farm when we spied a car ahead of ours blocking the little one lane road we were on. As there was no way around the car we walked forward to touch base with the driver. Out of the vehicle hopped a pimply teenager with a worried look on his face.

“You’ve got to see this yourselves to believe it,” he said.

We walked around the car and saw there in its path one of those monsters out of the Alabama woods, an enormous snake easily 12 feet long and as big around as a strong man’s thigh. Though it had clearly been run over it writhed back and forth on the pavement with a couple of dents in its side.

Not knowing what else to say, my father simply advised the teen to “Just run over it a couple more times, will you?”

The teenager took my Dad’s advice to heart and climbed back into his Chevy and ran over the rattler once, then twice, then stopped. He got out again and came back our way.

“I figure he’s met his end at last,” the boy said.

Sure enough, the rattlesnake was in his death throes. Back and forth it weaved on the country road coming ever nearer and nearer my little boy feet. Spellbound, I watched it as if hypnotized by the sight.

“Best not too close, son,” my father said to me with a hand on my shoulder. “He may be dying, but dying still he can bite.”

At last, the reptile ceased its writhing before us and came to a stop. We watched in silence as the boy easily manhandled the snake into his car and cranked up the engine.

“Tastes like chicken, I hear,” my Dad said to the teenager.

“Yep,” the boy replied.

Together, we saw him head off and then got back into our own car and headed out of those woods. The darkness swallowed us whole.





Smitten

by

Will Mayo

It's been some forty years and more but still I can remember listening to the radio with the gadget pressed to my ear during a long ago Alabama thunderstorm as the midnight hour drew near. Crash! went the cymbals. And then I could hear that delightful melody of Ms. Lena Horne singing, "Stormy Weather... All I have is stormy weather...When everything I have is gone... Stormy weather..." Crash came the thunder and then too the midnighthour. I was a boy in love. And I've been smitten by the blues ever since...


I have to start our music with Lena Horne's "Stormy Weather":

Here is her "Someone to Watch Over Me": https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=g8J2Gb-hMIY

To finish with, I want to include some music by Bud Powell since my husband and I went to a really wonderful tribute to him last night.


Here is his "Lullaby of Birdland": https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PW9EVC9Yv70

I'll finish with his "Un Poco Loco": https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=W_XWNaLQVAM

Thursday, February 26, 2015

Montgomery College Students Review the Work of Tunisian Poet Ali Znaidi








Let's start with Bethany Causey's review of Taste of the Edge:

Ah, A Taste of the Edge, how we all aspire to have that little spark of life ignited in us. Ali Znaidi does an exceptional job of igniting that little spark, “a taste of the edge stays w/ you forever.” Reading his poetry is like caramelized sugar on top of your crème brulee. It’s sweet and glazed on top with much more thickness once you dig in. He has a way of opening up your mind to thinking new things and seeing the world in a different perspective, for example he writes “I took some drops of bleach & rinsed my T.V. screen, trying to erase all of the mass communication theories of politics, & the double-standard.” Now, when I watch the news I have this image forever stuck in my head.  I highly suggest reading this with an open mind and little to no distractions around you. His word choice is superb, but not easy to understand if you have a million other things going on around you. I can promise you that you will not find yourself bored reading Ali Znaidi’s Taste of the Edge. He has a way of creating similes that you never would have thought of such as “she also keeps reminding me that crying erupted like lava flows as the needle.” His poetry makes you want to curl up with a blanket, candle, and cup of tea while you read.


“Ali Znaidi, Taste of the Edge. Kind of a Hurricane Press, 2014. Pp.22. Free PDF. (Tags: Poetry chapbook collection, experimental voice)”.
This is the link where you can download the chapbook for free:



Lauren D'Aria reviews 'Bye Donna Summer, Ali's collection of haiku:


 Review of Ali Znaidi's Haiku "Bye, Donna Summer!"
By Lauren D'Aria
In Znaidi's haiku, "Bye, Donna Summer!", he gives a beautifully detailed description through the Tunisian summer and the transition into fall and winter. With the rain, wind, roses, fruits, lillies, sunlight, and heat of summer, to autumn scents, dark wintery nights, glacial frosty winds, and cruel coldness, Znaidi allows you to walk right into the beauty of the seasons. Stating "pebbles in the pond/ scarring the face of water/ a broken mirror" gives a playful hint, and "black clouds whimpering/ foul smell of pigs in the mud/ tear gas in the eyes" offers a blunt reality of the seasons.  While describing the transition from summer to winter, he references a few of Donna Summer's hit songs, such as mentioning the "'Last Dance' of spring rain", and "On a spring morning/ Dim the lights, 'Dim all The Lights'/ I’ll miss you Summer" .  This haiku creates a great story, taking you through the motions of the Tunisian seasons.
“Ali Znaidi, Bye, Donna Summer!. Fowlpox Press, 2014. Pp.50. ISBN978-1-927593-31-8. Free PDF. (Tags: Poetry chapbook collection, traditional haiku)”.
This is the link where you can download the chapbook for free:

I am hoping that we will have a review of Ali's Experimental Ruminations soon, too.


“Ali Znaidi, Experimental Ruminations. Fowlpox Press, 2012. Pp.23. ISBN 978-1-927593-00-4. Free PDF. (Tags: Poetry chapbook collection, experimental voice)”.
This is the link where you can download the chapbook for free:


In the meantime, here is Night in Tunisia: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BQYXn1DP38s

This version is Dizzy Gillespie's.  There are many others, but I will stop here.

Friday, February 20, 2015

The Local Prize...and now Callie's Prize



From Feb. 21 to March 7, you may vote for a poem by a local poet (DC area and/or Maryland).  The poems and poets below are eligible:

Ethan Goffman for "Song of My Selfie":
http://thesongis.blogspot.com/2014/10/song-of-my-selfie.html

Jerry A. Scuderi for "Autumn Glow" OR "Treble Goddess":
http://thesongis.blogspot.com/2014/11/avis-d-matthews-images-and-jerry.html

OR "Emerald Ridge in Spring"  OR "Fertile Ridge in Summer" OR "Abandoned Ridge in Autumn" OR "Barren Ridge in Winter":


OR "A Christmas Sonnet" OR "Why Come for Me?" OR "Mama's Keys" OR "At 96th and 2nd" OR "Crystal Ladies" OR "Calendar Cowboy":
http://thesongis.blogspot.com/2014/12/christmas-and-more.html


OR "Do You Recognize Him?" OR "Broken Then Crumbled" OR "Tiny Hands" OR "Love and Justice":



OR the poems at Mourning and a Sense of Martyrdom (1, 2, 3, 4, or 5):
http://thesongis.blogspot.com/2014/12/mourning-and-sense-of-martyrdom.html



Amber Smithers for "A Lullaby to My Son"

Will Mayo for "Haunted by the Night" OR "The Sounds of the Night" OR "Window Shopping" OR "Phantasmagoria"
http://thesongis.blogspot.com/2015/02/poems-by-will-mayo.html


This time around I have received so many wonderful visual entries that I am starting a new category: Callie's Prize for artwork.

The images below are eligible.

Regina A. Walker's photograph at http://thesongis.blogspot.com/2014/10/hiraeth.html


Joan Dobbie's word art picture poem at http://thesongis.blogspot.com/2014/10/blog-post.html

Tamara Safford's art (1, 2, 3, 4, 5, and 6) at http://thesongis.blogspot.com/2014/10/blog-post.html

Avis D. Matthews' photographs "Selfie" and "Come Here" at  http://thesongis.blogspot.com/2014/10/blog-post.html

Ed Schelb's graphic poem "Bird Call Dance Hall" at  http://thesongis.blogspot.com/2014/11/bird-call-dance-hallcoming-soon.html



Juan F. Tituana's photographs of Old San Juan (1 through 10) at  http://thesongis.blogspot.com/2014/11/san-juan-puerto-rico.html

OR his photographs from Puerto Rico (1 through 10) at http://thesongis.blogspot.com/2014/12/juan-tituana-and-jerry-scuderi-return.html


Enjoy -- and thank you for voting!



Vote for Monk! (and vote for Clark, too!)



Let's start with the works that are eligible for Monk's Prize.  Remember that you can vote by emailing me at thesongis@gmail.com  the name of the poem that you are voting for.

Felino A. Soriano for "Trio of incorporated interpretations": 


It's also time to vote for Clark's Prize as well.  The following poems are eligible:


Martin Willits, Jr. for "Now That You Are Gone..."




Allyson Lima for  "Turn":

Remember that you can vote from Feb. 21 to March 7 by sending me a PM on Facebook or emailing me at thesongis@gmail.com .

I realized that I posted this entry without music.  Lately I've been listening to my Dillard and Clark CD, so I'll post a link to a few songs from that album.

"No Longer a Sweetheart of Mine" is not by Gene Clark, but it has been going through my head these days, so let's begin with it: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0mQtl70ghXw

I can't remember if I've posted "Kansas City Southern," which Clark wrote:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yfGRou7t9Ik

"Why Not Your Baby" is also by Clark, and it's the saddest song in the world: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2TQ6PYS2Q0I

Their cover of "Don't Let Me Down" has begun to grow on me:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oOdxNy6m-A4

I'll finish with one of Dillard and Clark's gospel numbers: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AnxEGjK-XVU





At Last...voting for the fall contests!


Starting Feb. 21 and continuing to March 7, you will be able to vote for your favorite poem or flash fiction in one to four categories -- and your favorite visuals.  Each person may vote once in each category and in one method (email to thesongis at gmail dot com *or* Facebook).  Poets may vote, and they may promote their poems.  The same goes for writers of flash fiction.  Musicians may vote, too!  When you vote, though, be fair (and kind, if you comment).  Winners of the contest will be announced shortly after March 7.  And yes, there are prizes.

The categories are Thelma's Prize (all poems and flash fiction included as full text in the e-zine are eligible), Monk's Prize (poems in honor of Thelonious Monk , Clark's Prize (poems in honor of Gene Clark), and Poetry...Is Local (for poets within the DC metro or Maryland). Callie's Prize will be for artwork submitted to The Song Is...  (Note eligibility.)

Please vote for the poem, not the poet.  Many poets have several poems in the race.



Now, who shall win Thelma's Prize?


Felino A. Soriano for "Trio of incorporated interpretations": 

OR "Underneath" OR "Morning, this"
http://thesongis.blogspot.com/2014/11/monk-iyer.html

Martin Willits, Jr. for "The Elephant on the Keyboards":
http://thesongis.blogspot.com/2014/10/the-elephant-on-keyboards.html

OR"Ugly Beauty":

OR "Epistle on Healing":


Joan Dobbie for "Tripping with Ryan...":

Ethan Goffman for "Song of My Selfie":
http://thesongis.blogspot.com/2014/10/song-of-my-selfie.html

Jerry A. Scuderi for "Autumn Glow" OR "Treble Goddess":
http://thesongis.blogspot.com/2014/11/avis-d-matthews-images-and-jerry.html

OR "Emerald Ridge in Spring"  OR "Fertile Ridge in Summer" OR "Abandoned Ridge in Autumn" OR "Barren Ridge in Winter":


OR "A Christmas Sonnet" OR "Why Come for Me?" OR "Mama's Keys" OR "At 96th and 2nd" OR "Crystal Ladies" OR "Calendar Cowboy":
http://thesongis.blogspot.com/2014/12/christmas-and-more.html


OR "Do You Recognize Him?" OR "Broken Then Crumbled" OR "Tiny Hands" OR "Love and Justice":



OR the poems at Mourning and a Sense of Martyrdom (1, 2, 3, 4, or 5):
http://thesongis.blogspot.com/2014/12/mourning-and-sense-of-martyrdom.html



Allyson Lima for "After Mario Bencastro's Algo tiene el otoño":
http://thesongis.blogspot.com/2014/11/after-mario-bencastros-algo-tiene-el.html


Joan McNerney for"Monk" OR "Pablo Picasso Night Fishing at Antibes (1939)" OR "Vincent Van Gogh Starry Night (1889)" OR "On Viewing Buddha in the Museum":
http://thesongis.blogspot.com/2014/11/monk-andpoems-about-painting.html



A.J. Huffman for"Honey, You've Got to Slow Down" OR "Singing Without Words":
http://thesongis.blogspot.com/2014/12/aj-huffmans-honey-you-got-to-slow-down.html


Pijush Kanti Deb for "A Devotee or a Beggar" OR "Your Cat and My Dog" OR "Two Languages" OR "A Poor Hand" OR "Though She Is My Best Friend"
http://thesongis.blogspot.com/2014/12/poems-by-pijush-kanti-deb.html

OR "I Surrender to the Tradition" OR "To Read a Brand New Book" OR "The Rhino-Skin" OR "A Magnificent Painting" OR "Me and My Poorness" OR "A Scared Idea":

Adelaja Ridwan Olayiwola for "I Sing" OR "My Harmattan Song" OR "The Coin of Life"
http://thesongis.blogspot.com/2015/01/i-sing-harmattan-song.html

Amber Smithers for "A Lullaby to My Son"

Prince Adewale Oreshade for "a bird in the sky for jennifer aduro" OR "olives and doves" (an acrostic for oliver onyibe" OR "send her to the north" (an acrostic for shade mary-ann olaoye):
http://thesongis.blogspot.com/2015/01/poems-by-abdul-kabir-abu-irfan-or.html

Catfish McDaris for "Elephant Tusk Boogie" OR "Six Headed Dog":
http://thesongis.blogspot.com/2015/01/catfish-mcdaris-returns-us-to-monk.html


Will Mayo for "Haunted by the Night" OR "The Sounds of the Night" OR "Window Shopping" OR "Phantasmagoria"
http://thesongis.blogspot.com/2015/02/poems-by-will-mayo.html

The other categories will follow but not on this entry.

However, here is some music for you.  Unfortunately, this won't be a greatest hits of the fall, but I want to find some new songs for you.

I don't think that I've played Monk's "Don't Blame Me" for you: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KshrtLXBdl8

Here Monk is performing "Rhythm-a-ning" with Gerry Mulligan: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0M0CthOfSMM

"Sweet and Lovely" is from the same collaboration: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-J8aGX7OsOw

I'll finish with a 1957 version of "Blue Monk" that he did with Art Blakey and the Jazz Messengers: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=98CuS9zFoWQ

Did I ever post "In Walked Bud," one of Monk's famous pieces?
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=R6wLaVCRgCw